CLC lobbying for health care change presentation guide
A Collaborative Learning Community PowerPoint of 12-15 slides with 100-250 word slide notes: identify a current health care legislative issue, describe the proposed legislation and your group's stance, set out how to track a bill and lobby on it, outline your lobbying remarks, and state the implications if the effort fails.
Editorial process
Last reviewed · August 12, 2026
Why must you name an actual bill?
The assignment names an issue and a bill, and those are two different objects. An issue is a problem in the world — nurse staffing ratios, scope of practice for advanced practice nurses, Medicaid postpartum coverage, telehealth reimbursement. A bill is a specific instrument currently in front of a legislature, with a number, a chamber, a sponsor and a status. Groups that pick only an issue end up writing a policy essay and lose the marks attached to tracking, stance and remarks, because none of those are possible without an instrument. So go to your state legislature's site first and find live bills, then choose the issue that has one. Naming the bill number on the title slide is the single clearest signal that the presentation is doing the assignment rather than delivering a general advocacy talk that could have been given in any year about any issue.
The five bullets map onto slides in a fixed order, and the third and fourth are the ones that get thin. Tracking a bill is a procedural answer, not an attitude: register for the legislature's bill alert service, follow the committee of referral, watch for the hearing notice and the calendar, and know that most bills die in committee rather than on a floor vote, which is why committee members are the audience worth lobbying. Participation is equally concrete — written testimony submitted to the committee, sign-in cards recorded for or against, scheduled office visits during a district work period, coalition sign-on letters, professional association action alerts. Give the mechanism and name the person who performs it. A slide that says nurses should get involved has said nothing a marker can grade, and the rubric criteria for this section are written in terms of specific methods rather than general engagement.
The lobbying remarks are marked as an outline addressed to a target audience, and the audience determines the content. Remarks to a committee chair are two minutes long, open with who you are and what district or facility you represent, state the ask in one sentence with the bill number, give one piece of local evidence and one clinical anecdote, and close by repeating the ask. Remarks to a general public audience do a different job entirely. Say which you are writing for. The implications bullet then asks what happens if you lose, and the strong answer is not that the issue goes away: bills return in the next session, so the honest implications are the delay measured in patient impact, the interim options through regulation or institutional policy, and what the coalition does with what it built. Because this is a CLC assignment, split the five bullets across members early and agree the bill first.
Likely learning objectives
Inferred from the brief — check these against your own rubric.
- 01Distinguish a health care issue from a specific legislative instrument.
- 02Locate a live bill through a state legislature's own tracking system.
- 03Describe bill tracking and lobbying as named mechanisms with named actors.
- 04Write lobbying remarks calibrated to a stated target audience.
- 05State realistic implications of an unsuccessful lobbying effort.
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Turn the brief into deliverables
- 01A 12-15 slide PowerPoint submission.
- 02Slide notes of 100-250 words for every slide.
- 03The five required content elements, including the group's stance.
- 04An outline of lobbying remarks for a named audience.
- 05Three to five sources published within the last five years.
How do the five bullets map onto 12-15 slides?
Title and the issue
Name the issue and the bill together, then explain how the issue touches your role, setting, scope of practice or community population.
The proposed legislation and the group's stance
Summarise what the bill would do, who it affects, where it currently sits, and state whether the group supports or opposes it and why.
Tracking the bill
Give the procedural route: alert services, committee of referral, hearing notices, calendars, and why committee stage matters most.
Participating in lobbying
Written testimony, sign-in cards, district office visits, coalition letters, association action alerts, each with who does it.
Outline of lobbying remarks
State the audience, then structure the remarks: identity and constituency, the ask with the bill number, local evidence, one case, repeat the ask.
Implications if the effort fails
Delay expressed as patient impact, regulatory or institutional interim options, and what the coalition carries into the next session.
Where do you find live health care bills?
Recommended databases
- Your state legislature's bill search
- GovTrack
- American Nurses Association
Search sequence
- 1.Search your state legislature's site for live health-related bills before choosing the issue.
- 2.Record the bill number, chamber, sponsor, committee of referral and status, with the date you checked.
- 3.Check the sponsor's and the committee's positions so the remarks are aimed at a real decision maker.
- 4.Filter every source to the last five years, since the assignment enforces it.
Reference shortlist
These are authoritative starting points, not a ready-made bibliography. A qualified reviewer must confirm that each source fits the assignment and supports the claim beside which it is cited.
Nothing here is cleared for citation until you have read it.
- 01
How laws are made
USAGov · 2024
The legislative stages your tracking slide has to follow, including why committee stage is decisive.
- 02
GovTrack.us: Tracking the U.S. Congress and the White House
GovTrack · 2024
A working example of bill tracking with status, sponsors and committee referral, if your issue is federal.
- 03
Legislative and Political Advocacy for Nurses
American Nurses Association · 2024
The participation mechanisms — action alerts, testimony, district visits — named as a profession does them.
- 04
Browse Objectives by Topic - Healthy People 2030
Office of Disease Prevention and Health Promotion · 2024
National objectives and baseline data to quantify the issue and the cost of delay.
Review before submission
Common mistakes
- Choosing an issue with no live bill behind it, which makes tracking and remarks impossible.
- Omitting the bill number, chamber and current status.
- Writing 'nurses should get involved' instead of naming a mechanism and an actor.
- Failing to state whether the group supports or opposes passage.
- Addressing the lobbying remarks to nobody in particular.
- Treating failure as the end of the issue rather than a delay with measurable cost.
- Slide notes that vary wildly in length and voice across group members.
Submission checklist
- Bill number, chamber, sponsor and current status on an early slide.
- The issue tied explicitly to your role, setting, scope of practice or community.
- A stated group position for or against passage.
- At least four named tracking or participation mechanisms.
- Lobbying remarks with the target audience identified.
- Implications slide covering delay, interim options and the coalition.
- 12-15 slides, notes 100-250 words each, three to five sources under five years old.
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